I m really sorry for having taken off this poem....but i promise i will make up for my recklessness...But i do value your comments...I cant dare take them off....they are here to adorn!!!
trepidation! this poem s so right,so lucid. there's a fright and ther's an inquisitiveness as well.it shows tht u r jumbled and u fear it.u don't want it to go this way n u ve 2 see it lyk this.u feel so trivial wen u no tht u'r emotions,u'r desires,u'r thoughts are not considered,u auch.. n ahhh....i loved da way u presented it!
Sananda...I M BEAMING with joy![:D] wht i feared about FEAR was dat people wont understand it or rather wont bother to! [:(]
Innumerable hugs and kisses for u r the first person to have put up the courage and understand it soo well!...i know its a task..and this poem's each line can mean many different things if we think it out!!Coz it uses too much of imagery[:P](criticizing m own poem!)
hey! thankz for reading my blog and commenting coz if u wudnt have done dat, i maynot have stumbled upon ur blog, and iam truely glad that i did. i really loved this poem:)
In my Mind...lies the EternaL Season of Mysticism...the SprinG... Each day... Every momenT... spLatterinG myRiad shades... with aZures of haPPiness... Crimsoned Lust... Yet with jAded yeaRnings... greYing of my Wintery hoPes
And all these I wish... to Liberate.... to TinT my Space with...
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trepidation!
this poem s so right,so lucid.
there's a fright and ther's an inquisitiveness as well.it shows tht u r jumbled and u fear it.u don't want it to go this way n u ve 2 see it lyk this.u feel so trivial wen u no tht u'r emotions,u'r desires,u'r thoughts are not considered,u auch..
n ahhh....i loved da way u presented it!
Sananda...I M BEAMING with joy![:D]
wht i feared about FEAR was dat people wont understand it or rather wont bother to! [:(]
Innumerable hugs and kisses for u r the first person to have put up the courage and understand it soo well!...i know its a task..and this poem's each line can mean many different things if we think it out!!Coz it uses too much of imagery[:P](criticizing m own poem!)
thanx...ur comments were really valuable!
hey! thankz for reading my blog and commenting coz if u wudnt have done dat, i maynot have stumbled upon ur blog, and iam truely glad that i did. i really loved this poem:)
@Abhu : a red-carpet welcome! d only thing i knw abt u is ur name Abhilasha...right?(if wrong .u cud sue me :P)
Its really comforting to knw dat u liked my poem...and i hope we like each other....looking forward to talkin to u! :)
yep. bingo. my name is abhilasha, though i wonder how u came to know of it.
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