Monday, June 11, 2007

Fears


I m really sorry for having taken off this poem....but i promise i will make up for my recklessness...But i do value your comments...I cant dare take them off....they are here to adorn!!!

5 comments:

sananda said...

trepidation!
this poem s so right,so lucid.
there's a fright and ther's an inquisitiveness as well.it shows tht u r jumbled and u fear it.u don't want it to go this way n u ve 2 see it lyk this.u feel so trivial wen u no tht u'r emotions,u'r desires,u'r thoughts are not considered,u auch..
n ahhh....i loved da way u presented it!

Shalinee..On MetaMinD Karma said...

Sananda...I M BEAMING with joy![:D]
wht i feared about FEAR was dat people wont understand it or rather wont bother to! [:(]

Innumerable hugs and kisses for u r the first person to have put up the courage and understand it soo well!...i know its a task..and this poem's each line can mean many different things if we think it out!!Coz it uses too much of imagery[:P](criticizing m own poem!)

thanx...ur comments were really valuable!

Abhu said...

hey! thankz for reading my blog and commenting coz if u wudnt have done dat, i maynot have stumbled upon ur blog, and iam truely glad that i did. i really loved this poem:)

Shalinee..On MetaMinD Karma said...

@Abhu : a red-carpet welcome! d only thing i knw abt u is ur name Abhilasha...right?(if wrong .u cud sue me :P)

Its really comforting to knw dat u liked my poem...and i hope we like each other....looking forward to talkin to u! :)

Abhu said...

yep. bingo. my name is abhilasha, though i wonder how u came to know of it.

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